tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post3571954291562050628..comments2023-10-22T20:25:27.137+05:30Comments on Malignant humor in my head: Between the lines (concluding part)phaticharhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-34525835779025196092011-12-19T15:07:27.522+05:302011-12-19T15:07:27.522+05:30oh dang, twists and turns to come here... hmm actu...oh dang, twists and turns to come here... hmm actually not bad ... its better than a run of a mill type story ...<br /><br />And her father knows abt it .. mm not bad :)Menacheryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641542758985010065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-33503205922347808992011-08-08T15:19:44.123+05:302011-08-08T15:19:44.123+05:30So I was not far from the truth :)
Enjoyed the r...So I was not far from the truth :) <br /><br />Enjoyed the read a lot, but there were a few loose ends.. <br />Hope there is another spookier story coming up soon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-3710553843792732142011-08-03T12:35:28.227+05:302011-08-03T12:35:28.227+05:30Hmmm... let's just say that I'd preferred ...Hmmm... let's just say that I'd preferred it to be a ghost story. Till the previous part, it went on perfectly and then seems to have gotten a little lost in the climax. And as I've always said, you've an expertise in spooky stories. This is good and different but not exactly what I'd expect from your pen (read keyboard). The ending somehow doesn't seem very convincing. <br /><br />Sorry for such a critical analysis, but then I actually want you to have your book published and win a Booker :)Nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09356457383586939084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-8169286328626508852011-08-01T11:16:37.509+05:302011-08-01T11:16:37.509+05:30ET: Thanks. It could've been much better, I fe...<b>ET:</b> Thanks. It could've been much better, I felt. :)<br /><br /><b>Abhilasha:</b> :)phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-15758606298996906482011-08-01T11:14:47.098+05:302011-08-01T11:14:47.098+05:30Ha ha haHa ha haxyzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112767813146384321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-84766851746176963032011-08-01T10:15:51.791+05:302011-08-01T10:15:51.791+05:30Great fiction..:)
Very very interesting indeed!Great fiction..:)<br />Very very interesting indeed!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-74885911260155797602011-07-31T21:29:18.530+05:302011-07-31T21:29:18.530+05:30April: Thanks
Red handed: :) thanks
Priyanka: th...<b>April:</b> Thanks<br /><br /><b>Red handed:</b> :) thanks<br /><br /><b>Priyanka:</b> thanks...25 parts, oh well... :P<br /><br /><b>Abhilasha:</b> Oh thank you, your highness! :Pphaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-52212907582955341882011-07-31T20:45:49.626+05:302011-07-31T20:45:49.626+05:30Fair attempt!Fair attempt!xyzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112767813146384321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-18259172240803227022011-07-31T18:00:26.196+05:302011-07-31T18:00:26.196+05:30Awesome:)
So well-thought out, I tell you. I'm...Awesome:)<br />So well-thought out, I tell you. I'm not happy it's over:( Come up with more stuff soon, yeah?<br /><br />Did it lose steam towards the end? The first few parts were more gripping than the ones that came later..<br />Don't compress anything, we will keep reading even if there are 25 parts to it, sacchi.CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-43952188779129221442011-07-31T12:56:16.351+05:302011-07-31T12:56:16.351+05:30Twists and turns and finally we get thr!! :D
Nice ...Twists and turns and finally we get thr!! :D<br />Nice loved it!Red Handedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17062645716811851771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-16619693687472304082011-07-31T12:49:54.754+05:302011-07-31T12:49:54.754+05:30nice.. :)nice.. :)Aprilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08683410003136845595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-23244392901967814322011-07-31T09:43:56.245+05:302011-07-31T09:43:56.245+05:30Vinati: Thanks! Yes, a lot of questions come up wh...<b>Vinati:</b> Thanks! Yes, a lot of questions come up when one compresses such a material to fit into a "less-than-10k-words" shortie. You're also bang on about the visiting card thingy; it's just that I didn't know how to untie that one, so left it at that.Didn't want to try forking out an explanation for it, would look artificial and deliberate (leave it to the reader's imagination, huh? Talk about creative liberties, hehe). About the car occupants, well - if you read the last few bits, Akash wonders about the same thing, and thinks it best to leave it. Yeah?<br /><br /><b>Rohan:</b> Thanks, buddy. Drop in often, will try and dish out more such stuff ;-) (Meanwhile, I'll head over to your space)phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-78857036909255831172011-07-31T00:58:47.157+05:302011-07-31T00:58:47.157+05:30I really enjoyed reading this!!
You should write ...I really enjoyed reading this!! <br />You should write more of these stuff!!Rohanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03468620050434270232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11073732.post-61636564466960344172011-07-30T16:33:38.728+05:302011-07-30T16:33:38.728+05:30Amazing piece of fiction. Though i'm a little ...Amazing piece of fiction. Though i'm a little confused about certain things like how did Deeksha find Planter's Haven card in her cupboard? and who were those four people who actually died in the car accident? etc<br /><br />But the story was very interesting.<br />Good work. :)Vinatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04722775946115523673noreply@blogger.com