(I was tagged into this...)
The elevator climbed. He looked at her tall frame. He’d never kissed a tall girl. Not that these ‘man’ things bothered him a lot. But he preferred someone shorter. His hands accidentally brushed her bag, dropping it. She bent.
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He unwound the metal string off her neck, easing her onto the floor. Lovely eyes…
sudipta: my, my...what an imagination. Parna, you reading this?
ReplyDeletepre: kyoon re...?
angel: :)
lol!that was a cool one yaar...unconventional thinking u have...like it the way it is...savage..rustic..and the refreshing dryness in it is enamouring!
ReplyDeletekay thx pal.. :)
ReplyDelete:( bahut achha hai!
ReplyDeleteyour comment box is maha moody!
ReplyDeleteNice!
lol @ sudipto
ReplyDeleteas usuakl, story with a twist... :-)
ReplyDeletebaby doing ok. thanks for asking. howz aayushi doing?
ciao
cynic: it has it's days i guess....thx :)
ReplyDeletej: yeah right :)
kj: :) aayu's fine, as usual..upto her tricks..
parna: all 3 stories of urs were nippy, and drove a punch! :) hmmm, missed the link somehow..maybe some word that would help us imagine the connection..
ReplyDeleteThere he goes again. Killing my sleep! Deliciously. :)
ReplyDeleteWhen I first read about the concept at Parna's, I thought of you. :) Even before I got to her tags. Any more up your sleeve yet?
ReplyDeleteArrrrgh . Ramana, I did not expect anything less frm you !
ReplyDeleteChilling !
gabby: :)...err, deliciously???
ReplyDeleteRhyncus: hey man, long time.. oh i've lots up my sleeve..these ideas just spill out...can't say when tho'.. :)
Ash: :) was, hmm?
Uh-oh... ok, change of roles. :) Now, phatichar, howzzat?
ReplyDeleteu r becoming a serial killer, literally that is :)
ReplyDeletehmmm...wonder what you are like, in person! i bet uhave three eyes n a 2 horns! :D
ReplyDeletemanuscrypts: *scratches head*, hmmmm...wonder which serial did i kill... :)
ReplyDeleteshub: now you're combining the devil and the god...too much! :) (got it?)
sudipta: either ways, someone gets killed pal, not good... hehehe :)