“Vishu..”
Snore.
“VISHU.”
“Huh, huh..?” Vishwanath awoke and turned.
“Hey, Nammu.” He said, sleepily. Namitha was his college sweetheart who’d often drop by.
She waved.
He chuckled and turned back to sleep. Nice dream.
Then his eyes flew open. But mouth quivered.
“Vishu,” Namitha said...again.
Namitha had died when they were in college.
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hehe....scary!!
ReplyDeleteBut why did she come back??
Was she missing him or some revenge??
Though I don leave back my views very often, I love to read your work.. :)
ReplyDeletebrilliant..!
ReplyDeleteHaan theek likha hai..... :)
ReplyDeleteOye vishu... Oye vishu....
ReplyDeleteUth bey Saale!!!!
Kya hai bey.., kaun hai....
Teri ma aka nammu.....
Tu to marr gayi thi na.....
Haan marr to gayi thi, magar Maine socha aaj bhoot bhoot khela jaye.....
Chal uth.... Ab darr !!! Main bhoot hun
CD: We'll have to ask Nammu that.. :P
ReplyDeleteTFL: :)
Abhilasha: Haan, theek likha hai.. :)
Abhilasha: But that sounded so much like Pammi aunty's bhooth, nahin? :P Maybe Nammi became Pammi after all these years..hehehe
ReplyDeleteNa bhooto ko chaiin hain na unki kahani likhne wale ko. HUH!
ReplyDeleteYes mare bahut time hua na........ :)
ReplyDeleteHaha :D I'm not very sure it was a good morning ;)
ReplyDeleteNice...but liked Abhilasha's reply/continuation to your story even more :-D
ReplyDeletemaybe she wanted to play "hide-and-shriek" or maybe the "ghost office" was shut down and she couldn't post him any letters...
ReplyDeleteStealing the show here also... Thk u SRI... Ab kya kahein hamari baat hi kuchh aisi hai..,, :)
ReplyDeleteMirage: :P
ReplyDeleteSerendipity: ha ha..welcome back. :)
Sri: absolutely :)
princess:...or maybe she just wanted to give a 'shake-up' call.
Abhilasha: Hamari bhi yahi abhilasha hai :P
wooo.....
ReplyDeleteIf the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...
Poor Vishu :P
wooo.....
ReplyDeleteIf the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...
Poor Vishu :P
wooo.....
ReplyDeleteIf the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...
Poor Vishu :P
wicked nammu..papa vishu...
ReplyDeletebad morning!
ReplyDeleteZackandme: :P
ReplyDeleteBL: Tch, tch, tch..paapa.. :P
Varsha: :D
'Subah ko jab ham neend se jage, ankh unhi se chaar hui..'.. :D thats a very bhoot morning I say!
ReplyDeleteRohini: Hahaha.. :D
ReplyDeleteGood morning indeed! Nammu was clearly in a fun mood that bhoot-morning :P
ReplyDeleteShreya: :P
ReplyDeleteShe came to haunt him in the morning! Bechara...sri ki horror story ka maara ...:D
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