Thursday, April 05, 2012

Knock Out

The contract killer exited the building and lost himself in the crowd. He stood with the other pedestrians to cross the road. A moment later he started crossing, but stopped suddenly. His victim was on the other side, bullet in his head; smiling.

What the..

The screeching SUV hit him so hard he went flying.

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13 comments:

  1. Nirali Naik12:45 PM

    Its exact 55 words :D
    ( OCD , please ignore )

    really nice :D

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  2. Soumya1:42 PM

    Instant Karma this one :)

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  3. Shreya3:32 PM

    ...And then it hit him! ;)

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  4. Tongue-fu Lady4:22 PM

    oh my..hahaha

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  5. Varsha5:07 PM

    ohh....fast!

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  6. Rohini6:07 PM

    CSL! The last line!! :D

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  7. Menachery6:15 PM

    whoaaaaa ...... smooth Sri!!! loved it

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  8. Rahul7:17 PM

    :-) Smooooth!!!!

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  9. the little princess10:27 AM

    oops!!

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  10. phatichar10:57 AM

    Kanthu: Hahaha..yep.

    BBB: Thanks.. :)

    Soumya: :P

    Shreya: Haan! :)

    TFL: hehehe

    varsha: hai na? ;-)

    Rohu:DSL.. ;-)

    Menachery: Thank you...whr've u been? :P

    Rahul: Thx, bro

    princess: heheh :)

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  11. alice11:24 AM

    Ah, this is beautiful.

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  12. phatichar9:19 PM

    Alice: thanx :)

    serendipity: hehehe...:p

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  13. Anonymous2:57 AM

    hah! Nice one! :P

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