Veena hummed a tune in front of the mirror, before bedtime. It was a new mirror they’d bought only that day.
She reached for her comb, but knocked down the cream. Drat.
As she bent, she looked up. Her mirror image was staring down at her, craning its neck.
“All well?”
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My friend, You've outdone yourself!! That was superb flash fiction!
ReplyDeleteohhh creepy..
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Sri...this was fab!! Creepiest flash fiction I have come across :-O
ReplyDeletenice..
ReplyDeleteU have a nice blog going...
Nirvana: Thank you, ma'am :)
ReplyDeleteBikram: :)
Me: Thank you, thank you :)
Dwiti: Welcome! Thanks :)
MSM: What a pleasant surprise. :) Good to see you here after so long.
ReplyDeleteErr.. couldn't comment, or...didn't want to comment? Funny word, this 'couldn't', huh? :P. Nonetheless, welcome back. ;-)
Oh! You are too good in sparking fear in the minds of readers. :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this one :)
aila !! ultimate :)
ReplyDeleteGosh! 'All well?' I will faint if something like that happens to me.
ReplyDeleteSuper Sri :)
awww..awww..aww.....super scary !!
ReplyDeleteBrrr....
ReplyDeleteSaru: Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteRoshan: Welcome here, doc :) Thanks!
J: Thanks :)
princess: :P you're gushing at the spook, that's a first ;-)
PV: Hello, new here? ;-)
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ????????????
ReplyDeleteOooo! Oh God...
ReplyDeleteThat was scary and funny...You ask why funny? I guess I imagined my mirror image doing that(craning it's neck to say “All Well”) and it made me laugh :D
Just ignore my Silliness :D
There was an episode in Aahat just like this.
ReplyDeleteFreaked me out then, freaked me out now :)
!!!!! :-O !!!!!!!
ReplyDelete*Chills*
ReplyDeletesumitra: :)
ReplyDeleteRedHanded: Umm..a new, very excited mirror, perhaps? :P :P
ET: I know, I know.. :) :P
Soumya: Uh huh? :)
TML: :)
BabaV: :D
MSM: Ha ha..ok. To bold the words, use the 'b' tag as shown below the comment box, when you click on 'Post a comment' here. For some weird reason, it didn't show the tags I typed earlier, because maybe there wasn't any word within it. I don't know how else to show you, other than maybe emailing that to you. Else, you could google on how to use the bold tag in HTML?
ReplyDeletehehehehehehehe sorry I don't mean to laugh. Infact I don't want to laugh because I always always knock the cream off when I reach for the comb.
ReplyDeleteThank you for telling me never to look at the mirror as pick up the cream.
and on top of it "All well?" ante. Devare!!!!!!!!! well-e gathi!
MSM: Cool! :)
ReplyDeleteaks: :)
Toffee: LOL @ 'well-ae-gathi"
I had watched the movie 'Mirrors' and tried some similar antics in front of the mirror. Was disappointed though, when nothing happened..;-) :P
ReplyDeleteLol. :D
ReplyDeletedaamnnn!!
ReplyDeleteKanthu: Something always happens..be patient ;-)
ReplyDeletecmus: :D
TFL: Ha ha..
I love this. It's kinda cute, as much as horror can be anyway.
ReplyDeleteNot that I'd want it happening to me! :D
Oo La La..Awesome.
ReplyDeleteI think of that sometimes and shun the mirror for rest of the night... :D
I want this mirror!! :D
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