Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Fifty Five(s) - 1

For the next few days (or probably weeks, don't know) I plan to try out this 55 word thingy. It's kind of like having a tequila shot to rid you of writer's block.


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Game over

Hostel basement. The TT room noise was getting to Saurabh, who was trying to study in the adjacent hall. It was nearly 1 am and these guys were still playing? Enough with it, he decided and marched to the TT room.
"Hey fuckers, why don't you...?" He stopped.

There was no one in the room.

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10 comments:

Scribby said...

fisrt! and tequila shot explanation is ahem! :D

ghostly writer you are :P

Bikramjit said...

oooooooooops.. well tell him to look in the other room .. someone might be there .. :)

the question is was he able to get back to studies :)

Bikram's

Ricercar said...

nice! the 55 word format seems to be suddenly popular again :-)

phatichar said...

Scribby ahem, ahem.. ;-)

Bikramjit: that answer is pretty easy, I guess huh? :P

Ricercar: Woh sab to theek hai, but where on this-green-sweet-planet of ours have you been all these years, yaar?????. It's been like what...more than 5 years. And aayi bhi to aise? One comment? That's it? And you have privatized your blog even. Not fair, don't you think?

Great to hear from you P, kaise ho? :) please email kar...lots to talk.

Menachery said...

scary!!!!!!!.. poor guy !

phatichar said...

menachery: ;-)

☆ Rià ღ said...

this was manageable, not as scary as the 1st post.

phatichar said...

Ria: :)

Neha said...

Good effort...but not quite there :(

phatichar said...

Neha: hmmm.. :)