Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Suicide...?


He pointed the gun to his temple and closed his eyes. Sweat rolled down his face.

Then suddenly, involuntarily, his hand pointed itself at his neighbor, outside. He was an ass-hole, but what the hell ….the trigger got pulled.

He watched helplessly as the bullet whizzed past the open window, and knocked his neighbor down.

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18 comments:

Me said...

Whoa!! Shucks....he was thinking of killing himself and ended up killing his neighbour. Cold blooded murder!!!

Visha said...

On a whim?

the little princess said...

what a change over mama!! me likes that!

Kanthu said...

I will try to be a good neighbor from now..:D

Nisha said...

Destiny!

Mystical Skeptical Me said...

Damn! :D Either way he is dead anyway! :P :D

goingbeyondthepages said...

Oops... isn't that too sudden?

phatichar said...

Me: Ha ha...not exactly :P

Visha: No..no.. :)

Princess: And me likes your comment, mama! :P :D

Kanthu: Good boy :P

Nisha: Yeah..that's one way of looking at it, sure.. :)

MSM: I absolutely love it when readers catch the irony I set out to convey! :)

phatichar said...

GBTP: Of course..everything changes in seconds, no? :P :D

Mystical Skeptical Me said...

I am glad! :D

Mystical Skeptical Me said...

I am glad! :D

Bikramjit said...

hmmm time for the next post to be the reason for killing the neighbour

but this is sad and such people are dangerous .. who can kill someone just like that ..


Bikram's

Erratic Thoughts said...

Whaa...like really what?!crazy neighbours, I tell you...
After reading it I came back to the title again and I was like Gosh Sri! You are such a good writer :)

Soumya said...

Phew! Love the irony.

Whoever he is, he's like me. I'd kill first and then kill myself, that makes it worth it.

I wish I could do that to my neighbors kid though who keeps wailing when I'm trying to sleep :D

Tongue-fu Lady said...

yeh kya hua?!?!?

phatichar said...

MSM: :)

Bikram: Weirder things happen, yaara :)

ET: He he..junior, tu bhi na..

Soumya: LOL..

TFL: Ajeeb daastan hai yeh.. :P

Varsha Naik said...

whoops.....suicide ke side effects!

Rohuness said...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! SUPERB!