Monday, September 12, 2005

Long story short...

(I was tagged into this...)

The elevator climbed. He looked at her tall frame. He’d never kissed a tall girl. Not that these ‘man’ things bothered him a lot. But he preferred someone shorter. His hands accidentally brushed her bag, dropping it. She bent.

*******

He unwound the metal string off her neck, easing her onto the floor. Lovely eyes…

17 comments:

phatichar said...

sudipta: my, my...what an imagination. Parna, you reading this?

pre: kyoon re...?

angel: :)

Anonymous said...

lol!that was a cool one yaar...unconventional thinking u have...like it the way it is...savage..rustic..and the refreshing dryness in it is enamouring!

phatichar said...

kay thx pal.. :)

Prerona said...

:( bahut achha hai!

Anonymous said...

your comment box is maha moody!
Nice!

J said...

lol @ sudipto

KJ said...

as usuakl, story with a twist... :-)

baby doing ok. thanks for asking. howz aayushi doing?

ciao

phatichar said...

cynic: it has it's days i guess....thx :)

j: yeah right :)

kj: :) aayu's fine, as usual..upto her tricks..

phatichar said...

parna: all 3 stories of urs were nippy, and drove a punch! :) hmmm, missed the link somehow..maybe some word that would help us imagine the connection..

GratisGab said...

There he goes again. Killing my sleep! Deliciously. :)

Rhyncus said...

When I first read about the concept at Parna's, I thought of you. :) Even before I got to her tags. Any more up your sleeve yet?

Anonymous said...

Arrrrgh . Ramana, I did not expect anything less frm you !

Chilling !

phatichar said...

gabby: :)...err, deliciously???

Rhyncus: hey man, long time.. oh i've lots up my sleeve..these ideas just spill out...can't say when tho'.. :)

Ash: :) was, hmm?

Sudipta Chatterjee said...

Uh-oh... ok, change of roles. :) Now, phatichar, howzzat?

manuscrypts said...

u r becoming a serial killer, literally that is :)

shub said...

hmmm...wonder what you are like, in person! i bet uhave three eyes n a 2 horns! :D

phatichar said...

manuscrypts: *scratches head*, hmmmm...wonder which serial did i kill... :)

shub: now you're combining the devil and the god...too much! :) (got it?)

sudipta: either ways, someone gets killed pal, not good... hehehe :)