"Aankhen chaar"
Their eyes met at the traffic signal. He smiled.
He was still smiling as his car moved. She smiled back.
The oncoming Volvo bulldozed his car, climbed it… and toppled, landing right on top of hers. Both were still smiling when cops pulled their mangled bodies out. Cops were baffled – “they were happy to die?”
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19 comments:
Ouuuuuuuuuch!!
Both seem to have slow reactions :) They would have made a nice couple..
Need more fresh material, although I enjoy reading the "blasts from the past" there is nothing like new stories :)
ha ha ha!!!... and they died and kept smiling ever after.. such a jinxed moment...
shortest love story ever heard..perfect!!
Red Handed: ouch indeed... :-)
kunal: aayega, aayega..patience dost! :-)
How've u been? how're the book reviews comin' along? I read ur reviews; pretty good - only haven't commented on 'em. Will do some day. take care.
abhilasha: jinxed? it's a first 'n last jinx, i say :P
TFLnice na? :P
*mouth open*
Gosh.
Priyanka: Welcome.. :) (err..I think you should close your mouth now) :P
Nikita: Welcome here.. :)
wonder if the driver in the Volvo too was smiling at someone on the other side of the road. :P
their eyes seem to say.. i can die for you babe/dude!
and they proved it.more funny than emotional..!
wow!
Diwakar: You won't believe it - I thought about the bus driver (not to mention the passengers) as well, but oh well - there's only so much action one can pack in 55 words, eh? :-)
And oh btw, welcome!
Nisha: Hello. Welcome here :) And oh yeah, the dark humor was intentional.
Nirav: ;-)
Oh...
Hey i was browsing through something and came across your blog. Couldn't resist reading furhter, went thru some and must say you write really well. Your stories are interesting.
Keep up the good work.
Deepika: Welcome, and thanks. :)
HaHa.
This was Funny. And what's funnier is your display name! :D
Drop in some time :-)
Awww.... achcha khaasa romance bud kar raha tha :(
Shruti: Thanks, wonderful to have you here; equally wonderful to've dropped by your blog. You're brilliant with verse.
Neha: 'bud' ka 'gud-bud' kar dittha, nai?
Short, and not sweet. Very well written. Thanks for stopping by my blog and your comment on the Elemental!
Damyanti: Thanks...you write well! keep it up. :)
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