Deepa smiled as the bus sped past the beautiful countryside. She loved going on excursions with her students. She couldn’t miss this for the world.
Yeah, but she missed being with them in person, though. Sometimes.
If only she had not drowned in one of the trips…four years ago. She sighed…and then shrugged.
Oh well…
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18 comments:
I was wondering how a small post as such cud be eerie!!!, but then well you proved me wrong :)
You can do this even with 2 words, can't ya? :P
Keirthana
OMG..... seriously...creating this fear and eeriness in such few words....marvelous!!
slick and to the point!
was that 55 word fiction? so much to learn from u!
Menachery: :P
Keirthana: I could.. ;-)
Me: Hehe..thanks..
ZD: :) Thanks..yes, it was.
Hahaha awesome this :D
Brilliance, I see in this post.
I can't believe you have made even such a short post scary and that too so convincingly... only you can do that :)
Soumya: Thank you :P
Mirage: Hehe..thanks, girl.
GBTP: Heheh..thanks. Touched.. :)
back with so many entries?awesome...:-)
Maybe you could enter the guinness book for the world's shortest horror story?
How do you manage to tell the same kind of story in a 1000 different ways?! Hats off
My God!! that is the scariest flash fiction I have seen!
Rahul: My boy! Thanks..yeah, blog diarrhea. Hota hai kabhi kabhi :P. How've ya been? Haven't visited you in a long time - will stop over soon. :)
Sumitra: Ha ha..I like that one. :P
Varsha: :) Thanks. Have no idea really..
Nirvana: :P
Whaaa?!!Like seriously?!Did you just scare us in 55 words?
Scary man!You are just too good :)
Arey, I hope you write non-scary stuff too :P Nice one!
ET: :P
TFL: :) :)
Arch: Hmm, that explains why you haven't read my other posts. :P :) Thanks..do drop in when you get time.
I think you need just an animate or inanimate object - to induce spook :)
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