Thursday, August 14, 2008

Feeling el(ev)ated... (The booo...chronicles)

The Plaza Complex is apparently a squarish structure with a huge light well in the middle, like how most malls are. Well, this wasn't exactly a mall, but back in those days, most shopping 'complexes' (I still can't figure out why they called 'em that), were designed in pretty much the same way, and this too was like any other. Except, this one had an adjacent building, 'wing' as the staffers would say, that was kind of attached to the main building through a 'skywalk', more like a narrow suspicious corridor you see in those crime movies (Remember? - close-up of a cop quietly slithering along the dank path, no background music, only his hushed breath?).

Now, this other building housed a nightclub on the fourth floor, the access to which was from the basement parking lot of the same building. Long story short, the 'mall' side of the building had it's doors closed to this wing (for obvious reasons), so the 'family types' could shop in peace and the night birds could prowl around safely on the other side.

The basement had two elevators that carried folks. One of the elevators was dead. Meaning, it had been non-functional for more than a decade and a half. Reason? It had an old fashioned door, with a huge padlock, the keys to which were with the owner of the complex, who happened to be somewhere in Mumbai. Well, anyways, it didn't work, and nobody bothered to fix it. The other one worked just fine, so why bother? And in any case, the night club on the fourth floor was the only place worth visiting in that wing, the rest of the floors were also kind of deserted (yeah, yeah...I see where you guys are heading. It'll come, don't worry).

So. Two elevators. One functional. Aaaand....the parking lot was manned by a security guy who, more often than not, was found flirting with the women employees in the adjacent building, which was apparently a beauty parlor.

One night, As N walked out of the nightclub, after having filled in for a colleague who was in-charge of the place, he heard hastened footsteps up the stairs. He stopped in his tracks.

The security guy.

"Sir, sir...," he huffed and puffed.

"What happened?"

"Sir, I won't keep watch over the parking lot tonight," he said, his face resembling the white-washed wall of a new flat.

"Why?"

"Sir, I won't...please don't ask me. I just cannot."

N kind of knew what was coming. But he waited.

"What did you see?" He asked, coming to the point.

"A hand.."

"Hand? Where?"

"Sir, in the lift that doesn't work," he said between breaths, "I heard a sound and I turned to the elevator...and I saw a hand beckoning me, from inside...sir."

"How the hell could you see a hand? There's no light in there."

(Remember those paleolithic elevators - wooden doors, a small square glass pane in the middle?)

"I could make out sir, in the light of the basement."

N raised his eyebrow. So much for being a security guy. Just then another staffer walked out and he heard the conversation. Something fishy. He stopped and craned his head with a question mark on his face.

N turned to him and said, "Have you ever seen a hand in that elevator? It's been dead for God knows how long, and this guy thought he saw someone inside."

"Oh that? That's her...", the guy said matter-of-factly, like he waved at the hand every day.

N frowned. "Another ghost?"

"Sir, there are many in this building."

N suspected if any of the staffers in the place were ghosts themselves.

Then the guy turned to the security guy. "Hey, how many times have we told you not to turn around if you heard a sound? Huh?"

The security guy just shook his head stubbornly. "I don't know all that. I want to go home, sir."

N waved him away and walked down the stairs with the other guy. "Let's see, I want to meet this lady."

"Sir, please don't go there now, sir. Why disturb her?"

N shook his head sorrily and hurried down. When they reached the basement, it was quiet. N cupped his hand and peered in. Suddenly, there was a loud metal groan as if the cables came to life, and the elevator rose up. The two of them watched in mute horror as the cabin traveled up. And then, they heard it. Female laughter.


(Watch this space for more such 'boooo...' stuff).

Happy Independence day tomorrow, folks!

16 comments:

Mampi said...

Wow, did that female laughter sound like , eeeeeeeiiiiiiheeeeehahahahaha.
I hope N keeps clear of all malls now. Kya yaar, abhi toh mall culture aya hi hai India mein, bechara pehley se hi forcibly insulate ho gaya is sey?

BlueMist said...

Wow ...kya shopping complex hai :) Don't know why all this while "Jayanagar Shooping complex" kept on coming in front of my eyes. Now I might remember your story next time I go to b'lore :P
Loved to fine details you drew about the mall !!

I guess N must have had heart attack there :-(

will there be a story of Ghost ; in the day time; may be in a crowded place ? They make these nights more scary :(

phatichar said...

mampi: Heheheh..yeah, maybe she did sound that way, who knows. N never really demonstrated it. Jokes aside, he said it was more guttural; but he was damn sure it was a woman's voice. :-)

He's not insulated himself from it. Apparently, these things are very common up there in the east. I"ve heard a lot of ghost stories myself when I was in Bihar. Of course, some are to be taken with a small 'sachet' of salt (holds good for the 'Plaza Complex' too. But ain't it fun to hear ghost stories? ;-)

bluemist: LOL at Jayanagar Shopping Complex. But to tell you the truth, I guess the 'Plaza' complex was closer in appearance to our very own 'Alankar Plaza' in the Majestic area. Rings a bell?

Of course there are incidents that happened in the day time. Coming up soon. Watch this space.. :)

Anonymous said...

never usually leave a comment though i have read your stories(malignant humour), this one is building up into a series of its own.. put the next one soon... all the best ... this one is one of your best so far...

a million different people said...

Wow. Cannot believe this actually happened. Scary.

Galadriel said...

i used to love alankar plaza, during the times i lived in b'lore. for a kid, it was the most fascinating place on earth, esp because it was the only building in the city that had an escalator. even though it only went up. :D
btw, chilling story. keep 'em coming.

vim said...

u telling me this actually happened??? :o

Ashwini said...

Woah!! an entire "Boo Chronicles" splendid, keep them coming. I read all your posts. I liked your earlier ones but, I definitely appreciate the fact that you shifted to the boo genre. You are one good "Spine chilling writer".

Pinku said...

hmmm...interesting so did the ghost actually get out at the club and go dancing after that?

Priyanka said...

Wow... Boo, indeed.
Keep them coming..
Was the time when N was telling you his chronicles with the various ghosts in this ghostly mall something akin to the 'Darna mana hai' kind of sharing at night? ;)
Must've been spooky.

Pooja said...

True or not, makes for a nice read. Keep it coming...

Mampi said...

BOO,
COME TO MY PAGE QUICK
I WANNA SCARE YOU TOO.

Priya Iyer said...

why did you leave this post incomplete too? why? why? why? when is more coming up?

PS: Did this actually happen??
PPS: I am back to your blog after a rather long time, and your boo stories are getting scarier than ever. :)

Neers said...

and how long should the wait be???
UPDATE! :)

Pinku said...

hey!!!

busy bee check my blog when you can...

Bluemist said...

hey when is next story up? waiting !!