Thursday, April 05, 2012

Knock Out

The contract killer exited the building and lost himself in the crowd. He stood with the other pedestrians to cross the road. A moment later he started crossing, but stopped suddenly. His victim was on the other side, bullet in his head; smiling.

What the..

The screeching SUV hit him so hard he went flying.

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13 comments:

Nirali Naik said...

Its exact 55 words :D
( OCD , please ignore )

really nice :D

Soumya said...

Instant Karma this one :)

Shreya said...

...And then it hit him! ;)

Tongue-fu Lady said...

oh my..hahaha

Varsha said...

ohh....fast!

Rohini said...

CSL! The last line!! :D

Menachery said...

whoaaaaa ...... smooth Sri!!! loved it

Rahul said...

:-) Smooooth!!!!

the little princess said...

oops!!

phatichar said...

Kanthu: Hahaha..yep.

BBB: Thanks.. :)

Soumya: :P

Shreya: Haan! :)

TFL: hehehe

varsha: hai na? ;-)

Rohu:DSL.. ;-)

Menachery: Thank you...whr've u been? :P

Rahul: Thx, bro

princess: heheh :)

alice said...

Ah, this is beautiful.

phatichar said...

Alice: thanx :)

serendipity: hehehe...:p

Anonymous said...

hah! Nice one! :P