Friday, January 20, 2012

Lifted


Raj stepped into the old elevator. The elevator started with a loud thud and ascended. At his floor, he stepped out and stood. Strange. He didn’t remember pressing the button. Then how…

“It’s ok, you’re welcome,” said a voice from inside the elevator, chuckling softly, as the elevator started with the same thud and descended.

*****


12 comments:

Red Handed said...

THANKYOU SO MUCH! I AM FRIGGING ALONE IN MY PLACE RIGHT NOW!

Mirage said...

Shit! I forgot the promise which I had made to myself, of not reading your posts after midnight. =(

phatichar said...

Red: :P you're welcome.

Mirage: promises are meant to be broken, now aren't they, hmm, V? ;-) You take care now.

sumitra said...

:O

PeeVee™ said...

Again, yet again, I looked behind my back.

-_-

phatichar said...

sumitra: :)

PV: don't.

Amit Charles said...

Creepy yet a Good one!



keep it goin;)

phatichar said...

Amit: Thanks, buddy. Welcome here. :)

Neha said...

Thankfully I read these early mornings and in the safety of my office. PHEW!!!!

Bikramjit said...

spoooky .. i bet it was the guy on top of the elevator , fixing something :)

or was it ? ooops

Bikram's

divsi said...

horror writin at its best!:) thumbs up!

phatichar said...

Neha: :)

Bikram: Hahaha...yeah, it was mr. fixit.

Divsi: You flatter me. Thanks.. :)