Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Payout

Rajiv whacked the ATM twice and drew the cash, cursing the stupid machine all the while. It was close to midnight.

“Thank you for using this ATM…”

Rajiv was counting, still cursing.

“….asshole,” the machine concluded.

Rajiv stopped and looked up.

“You heard me right, you dick. Now get the hell out.”


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19 comments:

BluBluBling said...

hahahah :P :D
I can never do these 55 fiction things , have tried so many times . I talk too much :P

nice :D

Soumya said...

Muhahaha :D

Krishna Sruthi Srivalsan said...

LOL :D Awesome!

Zeba said...

Hahaha. Brilliant.

Bikramjit said...

he he he he :)
made me burst out laughing


Bikram's

Shreya said...

Now...this improved my bed ridden mood!!! Made me laugh out in the middle of the pain!! :D

CD!!! said...

hahahaha......

phatichar said...

BBB: Thanks :) (err..for the 'nice' comment)

Soumya: :P

Krishna: Thanks :)

Zeba: Thanks & also for dropping by.. :)

Bikram: Heheh

Shreya: Glad I could make you feel better. Thanks & welcome here.. :) stick around.

CD: :P ;-)

Seяendipity™ said...

>Evil Laugh< :D
Imagine, what if the machine started laughing on this man's face :D

You're a hero. Our very own spooky hero :)

phatichar said...

Serendipity:...:P. Villain, you mean..

Nirvana said...

Hahahahahahahaha!!!!! I read it THRICE to see if I actually read it right! Genius!

phatichar said...

Nirvana: Come now.... genius? :P

Keirthana said...

How do you do this Phatichar? :)

cmus said...

ROFL! :D

sumitra said...

:O

phatichar said...

Keirthana: *clueless* :P

cmus: :P

sumitra: :)

Neha said...

hhahahahaha...really good!

aks said...

hahaha! you are brilliant !

phatichar said...

Neha: thank you :)

aks: :) thx..