Tuesday, March 13, 2012

Good morning, luv...

4am.

“Vishu..”

Snore.

“VISHU.”

“Huh, huh..?” Vishwanath awoke and turned.

“Hey, Nammu.” He said, sleepily. Namitha was his college sweetheart who’d often drop by.

She waved.

He chuckled and turned back to sleep. Nice dream.

Then his eyes flew open. But mouth quivered.

“Vishu,” Namitha said...again.

Namitha had died when they were in college.

****

25 comments:

CD!!! said...

hehe....scary!!
But why did she come back??
Was she missing him or some revenge??

Anonymous said...

Though I don leave back my views very often, I love to read your work.. :)

Tongue-fu Lady said...

brilliant..!

abhilasha said...

Haan theek likha hai..... :)

abhilasha said...

Oye vishu... Oye vishu....
Uth bey Saale!!!!
Kya hai bey.., kaun hai....
Teri ma aka nammu.....
Tu to marr gayi thi na.....
Haan marr to gayi thi, magar Maine socha aaj bhoot bhoot khela jaye.....
Chal uth.... Ab darr !!! Main bhoot hun

phatichar said...

CD: We'll have to ask Nammu that.. :P

TFL: :)

Abhilasha: Haan, theek likha hai.. :)

phatichar said...

Abhilasha: But that sounded so much like Pammi aunty's bhooth, nahin? :P Maybe Nammi became Pammi after all these years..hehehe

Mirage said...

Na bhooto ko chaiin hain na unki kahani likhne wale ko. HUH!

abhilasha said...

Yes mare bahut time hua na........ :)

Seяendipity™ said...

Haha :D I'm not very sure it was a good morning ;)

Sri said...

Nice...but liked Abhilasha's reply/continuation to your story even more :-D

the little princess said...

maybe she wanted to play "hide-and-shriek" or maybe the "ghost office" was shut down and she couldn't post him any letters...

abhilasha said...

Stealing the show here also... Thk u SRI... Ab kya kahein hamari baat hi kuchh aisi hai..,, :)

phatichar said...

Mirage: :P

Serendipity: ha ha..welcome back. :)

Sri: absolutely :)

princess:...or maybe she just wanted to give a 'shake-up' call.

Abhilasha: Hamari bhi yahi abhilasha hai :P

zackandme said...

wooo.....

If the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...

Poor Vishu :P

zackandme said...

wooo.....

If the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...

Poor Vishu :P

zackandme said...

wooo.....

If the start of the day is like this...wondering how will it end...

Poor Vishu :P

Blue Lotus said...

wicked nammu..papa vishu...

Varsha Naik said...

bad morning!

phatichar said...

Zackandme: :P

BL: Tch, tch, tch..paapa.. :P

Varsha: :D

Rohini said...

'Subah ko jab ham neend se jage, ankh unhi se chaar hui..'.. :D thats a very bhoot morning I say!

phatichar said...

Rohini: Hahaha.. :D

Shreya said...

Good morning indeed! Nammu was clearly in a fun mood that bhoot-morning :P

phatichar said...

Shreya: :P

Neha said...

She came to haunt him in the morning! Bechara...sri ki horror story ka maara ...:D